It’s believed that people who read for pleasure develop their imagination more and acquire better language skills compared to people who prefer watching television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,there are many alternative ways for people to improve their conversation skill.Some people think that reading a book is a better solution for developing their imagination than watching television.Personally,I strongly disagree that people who read a book will have more performances in speech skills more than watching TV. Begin with,the reason why watching television can help to boost our imagination and language ability is it is the easiest pathway for people to access.Every familiar usually watches a TV program.So we always get familiar with it.That cause we frequently copy character from drama
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,I usually watch Korea series on Netflix.It is the best way for me to enhance and expand the Korea language.After that
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I gain a lot of vocabulary and basic conversation.
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I will continue my activity in order to gain a
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language.
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,another main reason is a gesture.People will know how to give a sign to others.
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is because when people see that signal,they will think that what is going to be in the
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period.Comparing with reading a book that we do not see any picture.
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we will lack for predicting gesture.
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,my sister always read a text that causes when she talks to others,she never makes a gesture which is the worst scenario in term of transmission.
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,I told her to try to watch the movie
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can help her to improve
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skill. In conclusion,there are huge advantages to watching television
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