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With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?

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In the era of advancement, the advancement in gaining weight is increasing day-by-day.
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, that issue is rising every day, the chunk of folks believes that sport should be a compulsory subject for universities education in order to prevent the problem. I entirely agree with the statement.
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 essay will discuss the benefits of sports subject
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 as increase mentality and help the brain to get relax along with more active.
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 important benefit is that it will help to boost the mentality level.
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 games are demanding more physical strength, it makes students to processing their minds fast.
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, a brain of sports student thinks faster than other students because an athlete has to react at a time and he can not take a minute just to think.
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, after studying lots of books and information, the
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 will feel tired and with activity, the
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 will feel relaxed. For one thing, most of the learners like to play after completing their assignments to refresh their minds.
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 the reason, most of the schools keep the game period after the study lectures.
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, the sports period will beneficial to keep the student's
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 active. As learners will attend their sports activities, they will not feel boring and they do not have to follow
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edentary lifestyle by participating in games. To exemplify,
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 children prefer to attend study lectures, so that they can sit at the back and making fun. They do not want to participate in any sports activity. Even though lots of children do not want to attend any activity, but if the universities start a compulsory sports lecture every day,
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 students will not have any other option rather than to join the sports and it will make them active and energetic. To conclude, the problem of obesity is increasing with the passage of time. It is believed that the institutions should start sports as a compulsory subject in order to
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overweight.
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 essay discussed how it could be beneficial in the terms of activeness, fast processing
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 and relaxation for a
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. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the
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