The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The diagrams compare the expenditure of the school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall
, the components were divided into several parts which are Linking Words
salaries
, resources, and Use synonyms
insurances
.
Fix the agreement mistake
insurance
Firstly
, the Linking Words
salaries
were the greatest proportion over 20 years, and Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
have
included both teachers' and other workers' Unnecessary verb
apply
salaries
. By 1991, the Use synonyms
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
salaries
reached up to 72% which was more than half of all spending at that time. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the spending Linking Words
of
Change preposition
on
the
resources Correct article usage
apply
were fluctuated
between 1981 and 2001. Change to the active voice
fluctuated
According to
the charts, non-human resources held 30% of all Linking Words
expenditure
. Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
However
, in 1991, the cost of Linking Words
resorces
began to decrease to 25%, and it Correct your spelling
resources
had
increased again after a decade. Unnecessary verb
apply
Lastly
, insurance, the smallest part of the spending, had Linking Words
Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly
Change the word
slight
increase
every 10 years. It Change the verb form
increased
was
started at 2% and Unnecessary verb
apply
increase
to 3% and 8% in 1981, 1991, and 2001 respectively.
In summary, there were various differences Wrong verb form
increased
of
expenditure proportion between 1981 and 2001. Change preposition
in
However
, the Linking Words
salaries
were the largest cost to the school of all time.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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