Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days advertisements could be found anywhere in our daily lives. From my point of view, there are both positive and negative sides
for
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development. The advertisement is one of the most effective and efficient
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for a
company
to use as one of the marketing
strategy
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. Some adverts
such
as commercials or pop-ups are the summary of the service or products that the
company
provide to
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onsumer.
This
is a good
way
to understand
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the
company
and it'll
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a customer to think about using the service or buying the product.
Also
, it is really useful to find the differences between several
company
's businesses. The development of the internet
also
helps to improve the
way
of adverts. By using cookies setting function,
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onsumer can have a chance to discover a new service that they might like it.
On the other hand
, there are
also
some disadvantages. Because of too many advertisements could be found easily,
this
makes consumer confused and they might stop watching or checking some of them.
For example
, when you are taking the tube where there are a lot of adverts, it is easy to imagine that you won't look every
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because there
are
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too many information.
Also
, too many advertisements make people stressed.
For instance
, if there are too many commercials while you are watching YouTube, you might get irritated and decide to skip every commercial as much as you can.
This
also
happens when you are looking for something by using
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earching engine. When there are too many pop-ups, you would try to delete or ignore everything to focus on what you are originally searching for. In conclusion, advertisements are
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ery useful and convenient
way
for
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ompany as a marketing strategy.
However
, it is important to know that it might affect on
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pposite
way
. It would be good for companies to conceder not only advertisements but
also
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