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Traffic congestion is becoming more and more common in urban areas. What are the causes? What solutions can be adopted to solve this problem?

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Traffic gridlock is considered to be increasingly common in metropolitan areas.
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 dilemma. Nowadays, the use of vehicles is becoming popular because of its usefulness and convenience it provides to
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, traffic has become the most common predicament many countries are facing. It gives stress to human beings which resulted in a lot of road accidents and outrage.
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, it took me ten minutes to get to my friend’s house twenty years ago, but with the existence of so many cars in our place recently, I was able to arrive at her home at approximately an hour which cost me so much time waiting to reach to her place. The most effective means to tackle
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 issue is to provide modernized public transportation to the people. The provision of buses and trains to the populace can help alleviate
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 problem. The riders and non-riders would be enticed to use these transportations provided to the general public to reduce travel time, accidents and traffic jams.
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ullet train in their area to answer the existing traffic problem they faced decades ago. In conclusion, the presence of too many vehicles on the streets is the main cause and better transportation provided to the public is the key to answering the issue.
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