2020-08-22: Task 2 Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?

In the modern world, most of
the
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people believe fast
food
have escorted many youngsters to unhealthy
life
routine.
However
, I partially agree with the above statement because I think there are other factors that contribute to
this
matter and throughout
this
essay, I will talk about
this
in detail.
To begin
with, there is no doubt that fast
food
has become
such
a necessary thing in people's day-to-day
life
and it can lead individuals to many health issues because of the less nutrition supply. That
food
contains highly processed ingredients and preservatives which is not suitable for the human body in the long run.
For example
, A study done in London University found out that, 75% of people who suffer from diabetes and cholesterol have consumed more fast
food
.
Thus
, less nutrition value of junk
food
is one of the main reasons for an unhealthy lifestyle.
However
, I do not believe canned
food
is the primary reason for unhealthy routine. There are a few other factors could contribute to
this
problem
such
as less exercise, smoking and drinking liquor. People can get diseases even without highly processed
food
.
For instance
, my cousin uncle never had any junk
food
in his entire
life
but he was drinking and smoking for almost 10 years and he died with lung cancer a few years ago.
Hence
, processed
food
is not the only basis for non-healthy
life
. To sum up, even though, pre-canned
food
can cause unhealthy lifestyle because of the poor nutrition value, I believe there are some other major factors
such
as smoking, fewer workouts and drinking that can cause non-healthy routine.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dietary habits
  • self-control
  • advertising
  • appealing
  • convenience culture
  • fast food
  • obesity rates
  • nutritional education
  • affordability
  • psychological effects
  • well-being
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