2020-08-22: Task 2 Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?

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In the modern world, most of

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people believe fast

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have escorted many youngsters to unhealthy

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routine.

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, I partially agree with the above statement because I think there are other factors that contribute to

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with, there is no doubt that fast

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has become

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a necessary thing in people's day-to-day

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and it can lead individuals to many health issues because of the less nutrition supply. That

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contains highly processed ingredients and preservatives which is not suitable for the human body in the long run.

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, A study done in London University found out that, 75% of people who suffer from diabetes and cholesterol have consumed more fast

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, less nutrition value of junk

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is one of the main reasons for an unhealthy lifestyle.

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, I do not believe canned

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is the primary reason for unhealthy routine. There are a few other factors could contribute to

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problem

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as less exercise, smoking and drinking liquor. People can get diseases even without highly processed

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, my cousin uncle never had any junk

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in his entire

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but he was drinking and smoking for almost 10 years and he died with lung cancer a few years ago.

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, processed

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is not the only basis for non-healthy

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. To sum up, even though, pre-canned

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can cause unhealthy lifestyle because of the poor nutrition value, I believe there are some other major factors

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as smoking, fewer workouts and drinking that can cause non-healthy routine.

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dietary habits
self-control
advertising
appealing
convenience culture
fast food
obesity rates
nutritional education
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psychological effects
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2020-08-22: Task 2 Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

Whoever controls the media controls the mind. Discuss this statement and give your own opinion.

In many countries around the world,rural people are Moving to cities,so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. However, some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.