some people think a sense of competition in children should be encouraged,others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.What is your opinion?

In
this
era of cut-throat struggle, the education system has changed its perspective, it became more focused on championship rather on vital moral values.
Although
to have a better quality of life, one must earn more which can be achieved by hard work and sustainability in competition.
However
,is it is very certain than children should learn how to enhance their ability to do better in comparison of others to achieve more than others.
Nevertheless
,the other perspective of living life is far stronger than earning money should not be neglected. In society,there are many examples of victims of the clash. The fact is really fearful and gloomy that many talented children conducted suicide and lost their lives when they found themselves not enough competent than their peers. Here I feel most strong pillar of education is, making the child mentally strong to survive irrespective of failures because failures are often temporary so as the victory. If the education system instils
such
precious moral values among children, the life of talented one will be saved and eventually more strong adults can make society stronger.
Furthermore
,the irony and melancholy can be turned out into the glory of sunshine full of hopes for a better future.
Instead
of competition children must learn co-operation,
although
championship plays important role in some aspects, it must be healthy
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to have real benefits of it. When children co-operate each other there can be a wonderful exchange of talents among themselves which can lead to the fabulous society in future. In conclusion, ' One must move ahead not by pulling
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eg of others but by giving helping hand to lift others'. The co-operation benefits overweigh the advantages comes from
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • compete
  • cooperate
  • useful
  • adults
  • skills
  • motivation
  • drive
  • resilience
  • failure
  • workplace
  • empathy
  • social skills
  • reduce
  • stress
  • pressure
  • balanced
  • approach
  • ideal
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