Rapid progress in the fields of genetics and gene therapy is likely to have profound effects on people's lives in the foreseeable future. By altering people's genetic make- up, it may be possible for doctors to cure hereditary diseases, and for parents to choose important characteristics for their children such as their sex or level of intelligence. Such a development would be a major breakthrough for humanity and would solve many present-day problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The main aim of
gene
therapy
until now has been to cure or prevent diseases
which may, in part, have a genetic origin. However
, outside its medical applications, this
area of science has a range of other possibilities, some of which are controversial.
One objection to gene
therapy
concerns the long-term consequences genetic manipulation is possible to have. Some of the techniques used in gene
therapy
involve artificially altered human genes being passed down from one generation to another. It is argued that these genes might well mutate in unexpected ways, and might even cause new and possibly worse diseases
in the future. This
argument, however
, is unconvincing, since all new medical techniques involve some degree of uncertainty. While
it is quite possible that there will be some undesirable side effects, the potential benefits, particularly the eradication of crippling hereditary diseases
, make the risks worthwhile.
Another reason why some people oppose gene
therapy
has to do with individual consent. There is every likelihood that some parents
will want to take advantage of gene
therapy
in order to enhance their children
's characteristics, such
as hair colour or even intelligence. Opponents of gene
therapy
argue that parents
would be doing this
without the consent of either their children
or the future generations who would be affected. However
, it is highly unlikely that parents
would choose to alter their children
in ways which
the Correct word choice
that
children
themselves would not want.
A final objection is that some governments might try to use gene
therapy
to create a kind of 'super-race' of people who are physically and intellectually superior, but lacking in genetic diversity. This
argument, however
, is unjustifiable for two reasons. Firstly
, in every probability, it would be impossible to practise genetic manipulation on such
a massive scale. Secondly
, there is little evidence to suggest that a person's personality is determined by genetics alone. In fact, people will always acquire their individuality from their upbringing and education rather than solely from their genetic make-up.
In conclusion, I believe that gene
therapy
has a number of interesting possibilities, not just in curing diseases
, but also
in allowing parents
to ensure that their children
enjoy the advantages of growing up to be healthy and intelligent.Submitted by gia.thuy.do5 on
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