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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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An individual who is thinking to move or just moved into an abroad can face impediments if he
/
she does not know to the
language
 of that particular notion. I personally think that due to the lack of understanding of the
language
 a person has to deal with a number of problems which I will discuss . To start with , unable to communicate is
one
 of the major concerns if people not know the native
language
.
one
 of the biggest issues is communication.If anyone is confused and seeking for help , but he
/
she does not have proper words to send a message, no
one
 can help him
/
her. Most of the European countries has their own
language
 ,
for instance
, a person goes to Spain but does know Spanish,
also
 thinking to ask for help , which is not an easy process without a proper conversation .
Moreover
, people face problems to find a good
/
office job .Because no
one
 wants to hire a person who does know the native
language
. I know
one
 of my friends went to France in 2017, he was post-graduate from India
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and took a decision to shift into Franch. The problem he faced that to get recruit into a company he had to learn French.
Furthermore
, it is difficult to make social bonding with others To sum up,
Although
 10% of problems can be solved by advance technology , still people must need to have knowledge about the
language
 where they want to settle out . Because
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ack of understanding of it leads to many problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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