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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people argue that history offers vast information regarding mankind while other's claim it is of no use to understand human's secrets. Many researchers insist that
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uture is dependent on
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ast which offers a lot of learnings. In my opinion, one should understand human evolution to
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 and findings on
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 is the concept of reverse engineering. History is rich in knowledge, intelligence and data. Anyone can do
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 and find their roots
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, details about their grandparent, their culture and traditions.
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, our past defines who we are and everything related to us. The investigation and exploration of human's ancient period
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 our many
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, we explored many secrets of the human body through extensive studies of
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medivial
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medieval
 medical studies. Our elders are always a source of gathering historic
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, which sometimes help us to solve
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, a large population holds the futuristic approach, they believe past has nothing to offer, with
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 since new technologies and innovations are not only offering us comfort but
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 increasing the life of an individual through medical advancements. Many countries and world groups are funding studies and exploration projects based on the coming times since it will fuel
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rowth and development of a nation. To demonstrate, billions of dollars are being pumped into
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 based human studies like preserving human bodies to bring them to life again in
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. Surprising, a large sum of
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opulation is looking forward to
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ower of knowledge but lacks
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nterest of people, while
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 is the key to unimaginable findings. At current, more
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uture and not in the past. It is
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 are two faces of a coin, which compliment each other.
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