Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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constructing pathways is one of the most widely discussed topics all over the world. According to some, most of the resources ought to be spent on roads, but from my point of view, expanding railways is more essential.

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of all, spending enough budget on trains would be a valuable step toward improving public transportation. Every day, a large number of people are

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inside the cities or between different towns by the virtue of trains.

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, developing new railways will reduce the public need for using their own personal cars which will lead to

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air pollution and highway traffics.

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, Paris is an exemplary city in all over the world that has succeeded to control its traffic by the help of its upgraded and highly developed subways.

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, paying more money for improving railways will obviously help to decrease the rate of accidents. Undoubtedly,

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otal number of accidents which has happened in rails is much less than roads. Every year, numerous individuals path away in roads accidents

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a preventable disaster. Governments can lessen

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mortality by expanding rail networks throughout the country.

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urope Union is famous because of its great trains which cover travelling through all the different countries and by the help of that could lessen the rate of accident throughout all

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countries. In conclusion, it is logical to consider

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udget for developing rails’ network more than roads, as it can prevent

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road accidents and is helpful

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reducing air pollutants and traffics.