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Some parents believe that formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance while continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree that formal examinations should be regarded as the only effective form of assessment?

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A student’s competency is measured based on various factors and examination is the major factor to decide score level.
Although
 the project work and sports activity can give you additional marks, it would be not enough to get the desired course. Parents in a number of few think that the ideology of assessment through examination could provide better knowledge since the complete attention will be on the subject. It shall be discussed, how the idea would develop an individual’s talent, rather affect them.
First
 and foremost, an examination found as a proven method to check the knowledge and it is in the system for multiple decades.
Secondly
, it enhances the individual’s memory ability and theoretical basic knowledge is must to start any activity. I can assert the idea in that way,
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, a child had completed his basic education and to proceed to
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ext level, an assessment is mandatory to find the gaps and correct it. It should be
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 encouraged to get involved in extra-curricular activities that would help to develop multi-talents.
Firstly
, All countries have schools with curriculum and non-curriculum activities and stress students to get involved. The reason is that pupils should not feel education as a stressful task, it should be a path for a disciplined life.
Secondly
, Course work and project work apparently enhances and develops individual’s ability,
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, Mr Bill Gates life story justifies against the topic and he was not good at education but was interested in programming and he had a vision, which drove him to become Father of advanced computers. As a conclusion, I would assert it could not be considered the formal examinations should be regarded as the only effective form of assessment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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