Some people think that the governments should give financial support to artists, musicians and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, some people argue that the authorities should

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the

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financial support to

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those who

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related to

art

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like

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painters, actors’

poet

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poets

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and musicians. Others think that

government

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bodies should take care of them. I believe that the

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a plethora

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of things which can be improved by investing in the

art

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sector. On the one hand, giving financial support to an artist from the

government

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can be beneficial for the

country

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because the artist is only a person who represents the

country

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with low inputs and obtains huge outcomes.

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, the economy of the

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will grow because

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of the

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local

art

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their cultural values

and

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apply

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which attract foreign people.

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, the tourism industry will

boost

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.

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, the Pakistan

government

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encourage filmmakers

for making

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to make

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drams

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dramas

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and films which shows how beautiful

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country

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which helps in the increase in tourism.

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, there are some people who have an opposite viewpoint and they think that the

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should spend money on other issues and provide basic necessities to their residents

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as drinkable water, education and health care,

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of

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investing

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on

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artists.

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, especially those developing

countries

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should give more importance to economic growth and reduce crime and terrorist activities.

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, African

countries

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have a high crime rate and they spend a huge part of the budget on security and

decline

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crime rate. I think the

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should promote an artist and their

art

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because they give benefits in

long

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the long

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terms

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term

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and

they

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the artists play a vital role

for

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in

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the

country

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’s economic stabilization and build a

relation

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to

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with

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other

countries

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by sharing cultural

value

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values

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. In conclusion, the financial aid to artists is necessary by authorities

is

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as

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a kind of appreciation and

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long term

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benefits for the

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in

term

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terms

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of cultural trade with other

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.