Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

The experimentation on animals is an urgent concern for many people nowadays considering the harmful consequences that it can bring to the species used. From my perspective, before taking a position regarding if
this
activity should be prohibited or must continue, several ethical issues must be discussed
first
.
First
of all, I strongly believe that considering the enormous and variety of sickness that exists today, we need to focus all our efforts in practice effective and reliable scientific research to improve the health of the people. Unfortunately, sometimes
this
process implies experiment several solutions in animals before applying them on humans.
This
is the current case of the COVID-19 vaccine, which is being developed for several laboratories around the world. All these institutions are testing their solutions on rats before evaluating their effects on humans. If
this
step is eschewed, humans could die during the process, which can lead to harmful consequences for the company (public reputation, legal consequences, among others).
On the other hand
, the experimentation in animals is based on the idea that human life is more relevant than animals-life, which I could not say
that is
totally true.
This
is why I believe that, when it is possible,
another
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testing alternatives should be considered as well. Considering the development of technology during the
last
decades, we could use computers to do a
undred
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hundred
or thousands of simulations to test a solution
first
.
This
is the case of beauty companies, which in general do not test on animals anymore, after replacing their testing stages by computer-based simulations. There is not a right answer to
this
question. We must find
quickly
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solutions to illness
such
as cancer,
hiv
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HIV
or covid-19. Due to that, experimenting on animals could be a more reliable solution that computer-based simulation right now.
However
, we could not forget that animals have
also
rights
,
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and that our life is not more important than theirs.
Therefore
, scientific research
also
should focus on alternatives solutions to
this
matter, which each of one must be effective and reliable.
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Example:

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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