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As we are facing many problems which affect the whole planet, good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent days, relationships between various countries have become a key part in fighting the major challenges affecting the whole planet. The two main challenges that the world is facing today are global warming and water pollution.
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, global warming is caused due to the emission of carbon gases into the atmosphere. One of the major industry releasing emissions is the automotive industry. There are several reports released by the media showing the climatic change. All the countries have agreed on a low carbon emission agreement many years ago. Still, no one has put up the plan in their country. The solution to
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 problem is to reduce carbon emissions. The auto market should go onto electric rather than gas. Most of the countries like the Netherlands, Denmark are going full electric because of the agreement they made.
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, water pollution has become a major problem in recent years. There is clear cut evidence that water is polluted with chemicals and plastic. The solution to
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 problem is to have a good understanding between nations and clear out the existing plastic from the sea. The recent agreement between nations has taken us to
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 clearing out the plastics from the sea. Countries should keep strict laws on industries to prevent them from dumping the chemicals or materials into the sea I strongly agree that countries should maintain good relationships with each other in order to face real challenges.
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