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Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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It is thought
reseachers
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researchers
 should be allowed to give messages into
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niverse to communicate with other species while some people think
this
 is very dangerous.
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 with, Some individuals believe that they will meet
ailians
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aliens
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ritical dangerous issue because we do not know they who are to live in other planets. If they are aggressive and cruel. And they have
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 weapons and skills. We are die off.
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, when I was
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igh school student and I studied that
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European
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 went to
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America. After
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ime, The
indian
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 who live in the
america
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 long time ago took critical and dangerous plague. They had been usually
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 off. To sum up they believe that they would meet other
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life
lives
lifes
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 is dangerous. Another issue
say
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,
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 It is thought that scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms because
this
 is dream come true at human's history. What is means we know that they are anywhere, but we do not have
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prefer technology skills
also
 we can not find them.
Accoding
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According
 to a survey conducted by NASA Science Daily in march 2020, approximately 70% of the respondents who were expert of cosmic science said that event is we would meet unknown species. It is amazing and unbelievable.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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