The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive what are your opinion on this?

The
internet
has brought significant changes to our
life
. Some people debate whether these changes have an overall positive or negative impact. While there is undeniable evidence to the contrary, I, personally, believe that the positive effect of the
internet
outweighs the drawbacks.
First
of all, the
internet
revolutionized the way we communicate. Despite the risk that people can become socially isolated - the state when the person leads active
life
on the
internet
rather than relating to people in real
life
- most of us benefited greatly from social messengers
such
as FaceBook and Twitter.
Moreover
, nowadays, the Covid-19 pandemic, which is the new coronavirus pandemic 2019, has rendered the
internet
necessary. Almost all enterprises and government systems throughout the world are continuing to work online since communicating through the
internet
is the only option, because it prevents transmission of the virus.
Secondly
, the
internet
put the entire world and all
information
on it at our fingertips. The knowledge, which stored in libraries and was limited in access, now, can be found and downloaded by a click of the button. Definitely, the
information
spreading on the
internet
is not reliable - in many cases, it can be dangerous and offensive
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for example
, the science of violence, pornography.
Nonetheless
,
this
flow of
information
is an undeniably positive development. To sum up,
however
, it is clear that the
internet
has some drawbacks, I believe that the
internet
has had a positive impact on modern
life
because of its influence on communication and the flow of
information
.

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