has brought significant changes to our
. Some people debate whether these changes have an overall positive or negative impact. While there is undeniable evidence to the contrary, I, personally, believe that the positive effect of the
outweighs the drawbacks.
of all, the
revolutionized the way we communicate. Despite the risk that people can become socially isolated - the state when the person leads active
rather than relating to people in real
- most of us benefited greatly from social messengers
as FaceBook and Twitter.
, nowadays, the Covid-19 pandemic, which is the new coronavirus pandemic 2019, has rendered the
necessary. Almost all enterprises and government systems throughout the world are continuing to work online since communicating through the
is the only option, because it prevents transmission of the virus.
put the entire world and all
on it at our fingertips. The knowledge, which stored in libraries and was limited in access, now, can be found and downloaded by a click of the button. Definitely, the
spreading on the
is not reliable - in many cases, it can be dangerous and offensive
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is an undeniably positive development.
To sum up,
, it is clear that the
has some drawbacks, I believe that the
has had a positive impact on modern
because of its influence on communication and the flow of