It is sometimes suggested that primary schoolchildren should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is thought that teachers in
elementry
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elementary
school should teach to students about how to grow vegetables and take care
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animals. I think it has more benefits than it's drawbacks and I will give my perspective below.
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with, many subjects are more important to young children than keeping plants and animals
such
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as math, science and English. Those subjects are
necessery
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necessary
to students because they
alwaly
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always
use it during their future.
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, they need to learn a basic education
firstly
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. Children can live without
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care
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plants and animals but they cannot enjoy their
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without
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about math.
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, young
leraners
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learners
need to learn about basic.
On the other hand
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, there are several aspects
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education for children. Generally, people should go to school for about 20 years
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college. During
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time, it is really hard that they cannot understand about math and science because they should expose to
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subjects if they want or not.
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, childhood is
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perfect
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period
for learning about
life
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because they do not have any aspects
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them.
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, teaching
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ight view how to grow plants and keep animals is really important to young learners because
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almost same
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uman as one of
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pecies. If they learn
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rong knowledge, they cannot understand
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ositive view even when they are adult. And
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, it will become a serious problem in
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society
.
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, in my opinion,
knoledge
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knowledge
about
life
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not only human but
also
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plants and animals is very important to
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elementary
students. Most of all, people should live a human, not animals so needless to say, they must learn about
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ife of plants and animals during primary schoolchildren.
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