It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best both for individual and society. Do you agree or disagree?

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Almost every day of the week, you can read stories about youngsters entering wedlock prior to turn thirties in newspapers. In fact,
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issue has aroused much
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controversy
among different societies. It is widely believed
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beneficial to get married at an early maturing.
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; I personally opine that if
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wants to marry,
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, he\she has to be aware of all the responsibilities which will face
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. Several reasons go as follow.
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and foremost, young people are
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dynamic
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ambitious.
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, it is apparent honing
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of skills is easier in that youth. Admittedly, there is a tendency for them to chase their goals and guaranty their futures.
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, an
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enormous
number of opportunities will surround them,
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, make them able to have more options about
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est of their
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lives
life
lifes
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.
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,
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umber of
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women working in the academic environment witnessed a rise in
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ast two decades owing to the fact they have not adhered to their
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ancestor's
ancestors
culture.
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generations have been more
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passionate
about science,
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specifically
computer science.
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but not least, some people may not have a lucrative job at an early age.
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, they do not appropriate for financial stability.
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issue leads to enormous appeal to their parents.
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, if they ran out of financial resources, their marriage exposure to the lack of money. Indeed, they ought to fund themselves by taking
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remendous amount of loans which contain
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igh level of
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risks. According to
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recent research conducted by the University of Cologne, Iranian youngsters who have been married at early ages, have to make huge liabilities during
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economic depression which probably will not be paid back. In conclusion, I believe making a family before turning thirties will be hazardous to both society and
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ndividual. In consequence, before taking any steps all of the aspects should be considered to make a happy family.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fertility
  • Maternal health
  • Psychological stability
  • Social maturity
  • Economic benefits
  • Shared responsibilities
  • Ancestral customs
  • Cultural imperatives
  • Personal development
  • Career establishment
  • Societal norms
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Divorce rates
  • Life decisions
  • Subjective wellbeing
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