Some people that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that the important environmental problem is that we will lose
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plants and animals. Others believe that there are other issues that
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ignificant influence on our lives. In
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essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. On one hand, there are no doubt we are losing many various plants and animals because of the cities development. In the wake of increasing populations, governments need to create more house or apartment to fulfil the demand of the constructions.
For example
, there are many forests are destroyed in order to replace some new buildings.
This
makes many different kinds of plants and animals are losing their habitat.
As a result
,
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might die because they do not have a suitable place to live.
Moreover
, in the procedure of build-up constructions, it
also
harmful to our environment.
Consequently
, it causes
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exhausts and they are exposed to the
air
which makes
air
pollution.
On the other hand
, there are
also
some environmental problems that we need to notice,
such
as the sea level is becoming higher and global warming.
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, some
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that we might not have winter after hundred years because the temperature has been higher than before.
This
might change our lifestyle as we need always turn on the
air
conditioner and
this
is a vicious cycle.
In addition
, the higher temperature might cause the glacier melt. It causes the higher sea level which makes our lands become less which influent our liveability of residents. In conclusion,
although
the development makes the various type of plant and animals are becoming disappeared because many forests are destroyed and there are many emissions release to makes
air
pollutions.
However
, I strongly believe that it is more important that human need to face the higher sea level and the greenhouse effect.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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