Environmental problem such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days. The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution. why is it so? and how can this problem be solved?

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Environmental issues have soared over
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recent years. The governments have taken measures but they are based on weak agreements, as a consequence, the world needs to trust
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rather than politics to create new ways to provide clean
energy
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of all, politicians have tried to solve
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limate change crisis by leveraging on weak political agreements for more than one decade.
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, many countries
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all over the world joined
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the Rio de Janeiro agreement. In order to reduce carbon emissions, countries signed an agreement to do it, but they never gave details
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how they could have measured the potential reduction to make the policy a reality. Unfortunately, environmental damage is still increasing over time and the roots of the problem are still there.
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, the world needs to find new clean and efficient methods to provide
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, countries need to invest heavily
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science rather than reinforce political solutions. By doing
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, new
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solutions can be researched and
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founded to provide
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reliable
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supply. For many years, our societies have used
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fossil
fuels to supply
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to create our product and services. Despite that
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energy
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helped us to
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and it is
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reliable
and cheap to produce,
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energy
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has created many environmental problems. Solar and wind
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have increased their efficiency, but they are still not reliable and cheap as
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fuels are. In conclusions, Despite many political efforts to solve
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nvironmental crisis, weaknesses on the agreements signed by
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have not solved the problem.
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science to create new ways to provide clean and reliable
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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