Compare and contrast electronic media with print media.

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Everyone update themselves with
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current affairs and other
news
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through different medium and e-
media
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and conventional paper are the most popular.
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essay compares both
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source
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of information based on their accessibility, expense and authenticity. To commence with, nowadays, with the advancement of technology people can access any information at their fingertips. there are many reasons for it. First and foremost, the invention of the smartphone has not only attracted to the society but
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made them dependent on it. Because it is easily available and
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too at affordable price.
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, the internet made these devices
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powerful that individuals can communicate with each other regardless of their location and can exchange information through social
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platforms
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as Facebook, Instagram, Whatsapp and many more which can not be possible to
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through a newspaper. To cite an example, there are many online pages available where we can see updated
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and
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get a notification if anything new
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;
while
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in print
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,we get all updated
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on the
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day of the occurrence of the event.
This
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is the main reason why electronic
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is gaining popularity all over the world.
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this
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,
hence
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, we can see all
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news
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the news
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in
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the
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electronic
device
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devices
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, we can search
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find it very conveniently. So, we do not need to waste our time
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searching
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;
whereas
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it is difficult to find the
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conventional daily.
However
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, it is difficult to use mobile phones for elderly people as they are not tech-savvy they generally prefer to read the newspaper than its counterpart.
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, everyone is inclined towards
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electronic
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because of its several benefits
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print
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, albeit, retired people prefer
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the press
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because they are not able to handle electronic devices properly.

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Ensure that your essay fully addresses the prompt and discusses both electronic and print media in a balanced manner.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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