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Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers what them to do, but others think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems well by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Children are beginners and their role crucial for mankind. It is essential to teach all rules and regulation by their parents, teachers and guardian. Some people believe that too much restriction along with teaching causes various detrimental effects. Here, I shall discuss both perspectives and give my opinion. Children are the main root of our society. It is important to guide them about disciplined and proper behaviour with adults to make them a perfect human being. Cultural and social values play a vital role in our life so it is must teach them, thoroughly. To be an ideal human being in future, we have to learn them about the aspect of
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elationship in our life. The cases of vices are cumulative day by day and created prostitution and drug abuse. So, we have to devote all crucial guidance regarding it.
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, there is no denying the fact that too much restriction leads to damage to their mind and they become rebels. If children become frustrate from these pressures
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 they do exactly opposite. They start taking alcohol and drugs to overcome anxiety. They joint bad people company and carried out illegal crims. Sometimes, children become obsessed
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 committed suicide. What is important is that parents and teachers have to teach them everything along with it they know that when it is required to give room to their children. They have to guide them preciously rather than forced them to do everything according to them. Their support and love are needed to being
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 ideal child. In conclusion, the role of parents and teachers are most significant for the
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 development of children. Along with it, they have to maintain proper balanced between their liberty and restriction.
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