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Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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An overwhelming number of people consider that the leading method of studying all about the
business
 is to take courses while studying at the college or universities.
However
, opponents argue and believe that other ways exist to get
knowledge
 about the
business
 field. In my opinion, while people create their own careers to get specific
knowledge
 of doing
business
, I believe that the effect of building
the
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 solid base by studying the fundamentals of
business
 is more significant. Admittedly, there is a widespread belief that building your own career can help you getting
knowledge
 of running
b
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usiness well.
In other words
, aspiring entrepreneurs start doing their own companies without any specific skills.
As a result
, they have to understand the
business
 process with the help of other people. They begin learning how to account the
debts
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 and credits, how to work with marketing, corporate culture
as well as they
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 should know how to satisfy the customer’s needs.
For instance
, the famous figures
such
 as Steve Jobs and Steve Wozniak established the company Apple in
1980’s
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 without any specific skills in that field and they had to understand how to sell their products and identified the target audience.
On the other hand
, the best way to understand how the
business
 works is to build
the
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fundamental
knowledge
 at college or university.
In other words
, students can ask their professors the various number of questions during their classes as well as try to tackle different real cases of huge corporations.
For example
, at Stanford
university
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, students may go to the
business
 incubator to create the organization with real tasks
such
 as creating the strategy and the product, identifying the target audience and their needs and
hence
, make the company in the ideal conditions before registering in the real life. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I am firmly convinced that building the fundamental proficiency of doing
business
 is the crucial part before making the company in the real world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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