Some people it is good to share as much information as possible in sceintific research,business and academic world, others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Information

sharing is fundamental to the development of new knowledge . While many believe that

information

should be shared for free, some others argue that charging a fee for some data is mandatory. In my opinion, people need to be rewarded fairly for their work and

payment

for access to

information

is just,

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payment

should be regulated. On the one hand, investigation and generation of new data is a time-consuming activity and requires

further

education most of the time.

This

is mainly because people who do

research

spent many years studying their disciplines and later passed even more time working to generate new

information

.

As a result

, it is necessary to reward researchers with a fair

payment

that allows them to live from their work.

This

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This payment incentive

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payment

incentives the best academics to be involved in the

research

field.

On the other hand

, some

information

,

for instance

, a new treatment for a disease is very relevant for

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hole mankind.

Therefore

,

this

type of discoveries should be made public making all the people able to enjoy benefits related to

this

advancements. Ho In conclusion,

research

is a field that requires hard work and time and,

therefore

, it should be rewarded with attractive salaries.

However

, some

information

like medical discoveries should be affordable for the entire population. In my opinion,

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nformation should be shared for a fair fee in order to finance more

research

.