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Some people it is good to share as much information as possible in sceintific research,business and academic world, others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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 sharing is fundamental to the development of new knowledge . While many believe that
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 should be shared for free, some others argue that charging a fee for some data is mandatory. In my opinion, people need to be rewarded fairly for their work and
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 for access to
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 is just,
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payment
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 should be regulated. On the one hand, investigation and generation of new data is a time-consuming activity and requires
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 education most of the time.
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 is mainly because people who do
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 spent many years studying their disciplines and later passed even more time working to generate new
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.
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, it is necessary to reward researchers with a fair
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 that allows them to live from their work.
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 incentives the best academics to be involved in the
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 field.
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, some
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,
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, a new treatment for a disease is very relevant for
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hole mankind.
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,
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 type of discoveries should be made public making all the people able to enjoy benefits related to
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 advancements. Ho In conclusion,
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 is a field that requires hard work and time and,
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, it should be rewarded with attractive salaries.
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, some
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 like medical discoveries should be affordable for the entire population. In my opinion,
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nformation should be shared for a fair fee in order to finance more
research
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