It is too expensive to look after and repair old building. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Authorities have these buildings as the construction of buildings for services, companies, or government departments was connected with
being
more aware in the manner that they invest the council funds in old buildings because the materials and workload Change the verb form
been
is
more expensive than modern constructions. Change the verb form
are
However
, the historic value
of this
kind of building is significant for many people who lookVerify preposition usage
at
h
eritage of the community. In my view, I think that councils have to look after and repair buildings which have historical Add an article
the
a
value
and represents
a part of the hearts of the citizens Change the verb form
represent
such
as churchs
, villages, and schools.
Correct your spelling
churches
First
of all, in the pastAdd a comma
,
Add an article
the
arts
field. Change the noun form
art
Thus
, there was a strong trend to include different ancient methods and techniques of construction and decoration. Iconics building were
built in the 30s and have influences of Change the verb form
was
gotic
and catholic styles. Many of them were built by recognized artists which had unique techniques which are impossible to find in these days. Correct your spelling
gothic
Besides
, the precision and details that this
kind of building considered are unvalueble
. Namely, Taj Correct your spelling
invaluable
Majal
in India, the Notre Dame church in France, or White House in the USA. All of them are unique and replaced artist expressions.
Another reason to support the idea to spend funds in old buildings is the historical Correct your spelling
Mahal
value
according to the
past events Remove the article
apply
such
as wars,weddings,sports or leaders. Indeed, there is a Catholic temple
in Chile call Maipu temple
which was built around 1800. This
temple
was order
to build for Bernardo O'Higgins a famous Change the verb form
was ordered
chilean
solder. Bernardo Change the capitalization
Chilean
lead
the liberation of Chile from the Spain colony and when he wons the combat Change the verb form
leads
also
decided to build a temple
for the Carmen's Virgen in order to thank for the victory. This
building receives many people who want to be connect
with their religion and Change the verb form
connect
also
ask to
the Virgen a wish Remove the preposition
apply
for
say Verify preposition usage
to
thank
for a concede wish.
In conclusion, old buildings have paramount Change the verb form
thanks
value
, not only for materials of construction or art styles. Most of the old buildings are heritage and represent a story or an import event which represent diferents
values, beliefs and traditions.Correct your spelling
different
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