It is too expensive to look after and repair old building. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Authorities have
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more aware in the manner that they invest the council funds in old buildings because the materials and workload
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more expensive than modern constructions.
However
, the historic
value
of
this
kind of building is significant for many people who look
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these buildings as
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eritage of the community. In my view, I think that councils have to look after and repair buildings which have historical
value
and
represents
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a part of the hearts of the citizens
such
as
churchs
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churches
, villages, and schools.
First
of all, in the past
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the construction of buildings for services, companies, or government departments was connected with
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arts
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field.
Thus
, there was a strong trend to include different ancient methods and techniques of construction and decoration. Iconics building
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built in the 30s and have influences of
gotic
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gothic
and catholic styles. Many of them were built by recognized artists which had unique techniques which are impossible to find in these days.
Besides
, the precision and details that
this
kind of building considered are
unvalueble
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invaluable
. Namely, Taj
Majal
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Mahal
in India, the Notre Dame church in France, or White House in the USA. All of them are unique and replaced artist expressions. Another reason to support the idea to spend funds in old buildings is the historical
value
according to
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past events
such
as wars,weddings,sports or leaders. Indeed, there is a Catholic
temple
in Chile call Maipu
temple
which was built around 1800.
This
temple
was order
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to build for Bernardo O'Higgins a famous
chilean
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solder. Bernardo
lead
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the liberation of Chile from the Spain colony and when he wons the combat
also
decided to build a
temple
for the Carmen's Virgen in order to thank for the victory.
This
building receives many people who want to
be connect
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with their religion and
also
ask
to
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the Virgen a wish
for
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say
thank
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for a concede wish. In conclusion, old buildings have paramount
value
, not only for materials of construction or art styles. Most of the old buildings are heritage and represent a story or an import event which represent
diferents
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different
values, beliefs and traditions.
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