More and more people could now access information from computers and other electronic devices. Therefore, there is no need to use printed books, magazines, or newspapers on paper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, technology has been changing
people
's lives at a faster rate than we can imagine. This
phenomenon is in the transmission of information this
is especially obvious, so I feel that traditional media
are no longer needed. I don't agree with that. Indeed, in recent years, the development speed of media
science and technology has exceeded all the imagination, so that people
can Do
not go out of the house, only through the touch screen or click the mouse to understand the world. We can use computers and computers Unnecessary verb
apply
Get
all kinds of knowledge from all over the world, Fix the infinitive
to Get
such
as the local weather forecast, the latest ball game scores, and history. And the electronic equipment presents us with more dimensional intelligence, video, audio and clear photos It is more attractive than traditional newspapers and books
. But this
does not mean that the traditional way of word acquisition will disappear. First of all, compared with. This
is because a lot of time For the sake of being quick, the instruction on the website will sacrifice its comprehensiveness and authenticity. Traditional books
are available here Its advantage is that most of the books
and magazines published will be reviewed by professional editors. In addition
, with the development of new media
, many old people
and children will still consider using the tradition they are used to In this
paper. Elderly people
may use traditional newspapers to keep up with the latest information because they can't use the Internet Smell. ⽽ children may be required to acquire knowledge of various subjects through traditional books
under the supervision of their parents Some parents may think that there will be bad content on the Internet, and there
is too much information, which can easily lead to children's falling in love Addiction. 5. In general, Correct word choice
that there
although
the new media
law has accelerated the speed of media
dissemination and increased the diversity of content, However
, the traditional ⽅ style is still indispensable, and the combination of the two is effectiveFix capitalization
however
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite