Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Wearing fashionable clothes are becoming increasingly popular among several people.
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is the case and why it is a negative development for our community.
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, social media has revolutionized the manner in which individuals socialize creating a virtual competition of status where peers are pressured to post pictures with trendy clothes to raise the popularity bar. Linking Words
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, advertisement has increased steadily over the Linking Words
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decades practically forcing society to purchase as there is an uninterrupted exposure to propaganda on television, newspapers, throughout the city’s walls and the internet. Linking Words
As a result
, compulsive buying has significantly increased in the current generation impacting their values and quality of life.
The long-lasting habit of dressing fashionably is a negative attitude. Linking Words
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, many people face financial outbreaks Linking Words
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of following trends just for the sake of status which eventually leads to depression as they struggle to pay off their debt. Linking Words
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, the compulsive behaviour Linking Words
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developed often leads to individuals becoming irrationally attached to items that they do not need often occupying a tremendous amount of space in their homes and lives. Linking Words
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, more and more families not only need to seek help to pay their debts often by taking high-interest loans but Linking Words
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psychological aid to re-educate their children on the values for a meaningful life.
In conclusion, society takes a hard cultural and financial hit as the current generation dresses just for the sake of impressing. Each individual, in my opinion, should balance their values on the social importance of clothing as it can potentially lead to bankruptcy and depression.Linking Words
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