Task 2: Some people believe that young people know about international pop and movie stars but know very less about famous people from the history in their own country. Why is this? How can more interest be created in young people to gain more knowledge about their own famous people from history?

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elatively poor understanding about historical ones. To my own knowledge,

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rom the development of social media and I believe that only by practising new teaching methods in

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can it gain its

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. The emergence of many social platforms is mostly attributing to the fame of prominent figures in the entertainment industry. Since the press nowadays ar

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ll about the glamorous life of famous people, the youngsters can now easily gain access into one’s life merely by scrolling the internet.

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fascinates people with the fact that they can have insight into the ce

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rivacy,

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gossiping about them.

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is understandably more absorbing than learning about one’s triumph in

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textbooks, which many students consider dull.

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, many students are now spending a significant amount of their spare time reading about prevailing public figures,

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hem. In order to boost young people’s appreciation about one historical figure,

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must be presented in a more appealing way. It is undoubtedly true that regular curricular in schools ha

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ery unattractive ways to teach

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since one-way interactions between teacher and students in a class lecture can hardly draw any students

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. Because of that, applying in

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ovative strategy in teaching is necessary. Schools should arrange more extracurricular activities including visiting the historical sites or role-playing some historical heroes so that their students can proactively learn about the

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of their country. These strategies can kindle the enthusiasm about

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in students; thereby, motivating them to take

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studies into

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subject. In

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way, the young can become eager to know more about famous figures in

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. All things considered, it is true that the accessibility of social media is the force that drives young people's

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into entertainment’s stars. In order to draw more

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to historical figures, schools need to offer historical activities that require more active learning.