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Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services.

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It is irrefutable that
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rowing number of internet users has taken a mammoth dimension.
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, a major amount of information is transferred via web-sources. There are debates between those who believe that authorities should allow people to use web-sources for free and those who think that
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 kind of services should be paid by users.
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 of
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atter. There are certain reasons for free
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 to the Internet.
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, online resources are crucial for students because the dominating number of literacies are available in special
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. Usually
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students experience
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ack of finance due to
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igh cost of education in university and other daily expenditures.
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, free
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 to the Internet would help youngsters to foster educational process.
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, to find
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ob without the Internet have become almost impossible.
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 why jobless people without meaning to survive are trapped
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 the circle of unemployment.
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, these two reasons would argue in
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 of paid
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 to the Internet.
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, organizations which provide the Internet and supports users are obliged to pay salaries for their employees.
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 Internet-providers spend their profit to cover
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ages of staff. And without financial flows from their clients
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it would be impossible.
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, bills for the Internet providing services encourage people to direct communications.
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, face to face interactions create stronger bonds between people and helps to strengthen social skills.
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, researches revealed that in countries with
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igher cost of
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access
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 to the Internet people are more communicative and friendly. To put in a nutshell, free
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 to the Internet
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such
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 benefits as fostering of education and providing job vacancies for unemployed.
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, people should pay for using the Internet due to
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alaries of IT employees and motivation to direct interactions.
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