With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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on mars, many of them have been trying to communicate with other planets. A fraction of the scientist holds a notion that it would be dangerous to the earth.
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and tries to arrive at a rational conclusion. With the unparalleled development of technology, over years, many a scientist transmits signals in the form of different codes to other planets with the expectation that aliens might encounter them.The encyclopedia depicts an alien that found by Israeli professors in 1998.If it is real it would be the epitome for the progress of connecting to extraterrestrial
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, reaching other planets might pave the way to procure scarce resources of
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the standard of living of humans.
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global warming is the major concern for all living things across the globe. It is expecting that
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in other planets might address
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,millions of amount spent on
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forms might be futile, since there is not any response from other planets for decades.That huge amount could be used for solving current issues.Apart from that, aliens or living things in the other planets might be very dangerous to the
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of human beings.
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seeking out contact with alien civilisations.Aliens might consider human as a microorganism.On top of all these,
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dvent of new planet creatures might be resulted in the saturation of job opportunities and would lead not only high unemployment but distress among the population as well. In short,
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contacting other planets might be provided scarce resources to earth, huge expenses on transmitting messages, expecting harmfulness from aliens as well as it's
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ell-being of society should not be overlooked. Ergo, I strongly believe that connecting with Intelligent
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forms on other planets would be dangerous.
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