Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him. Write a letter replying to your friend's offer. In your letter: •explain what you know about your friend's company •choose whether you accept or decline the offer •give reasons for your choice
I’m writing
this
letter to let you know about my decision about the proposal you sent.
Firstly
, let me thank you for your offer, I was surprised and amazed when I received your email for the offer. I know that you are an intelligent businessman Your company is considered as an esteemed institute of our city.
However
, due to
several reasons, I can’t accept your proposal. The private cause is my passion. I’m truly passionate about real estate and already started working on it. This
thought is inculcated into me by my family, and currently, I am also
fascinated by it.
I could have thought about your deal if you had asked me a year ago, but right now, I am working on a crucial and my own first project ever that I have been getting from a client.
I hope you can understand it.
Keep in touch.
Your best friend,
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single idea per paragraph
Make sure each paragraph contains a single, clear idea to improve readability.
logical structure
To improve coherence, consider using more transitional words and phrases to link your ideas smoothly.
complete response
Add a brief introduction about your background in real estate to give more context for your decision.
suitable writing tone
Appropriate writing tone that fits the context of a friendly yet professional letter.
greeting and closing
Clear and polite greeting and closing, which are essential for maintaining a friendly tone.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.