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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immegration? To what consequences can it lead?

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Immigration has a considerable impact on our society. Each year more and more people decide to leave their home
country
 and settle in a different one. Let us discuss why people immigrate and the positive and negative consequences of
this
 migration. The primary reason for people moving to a different
country
 specifically to a developed one is a better quality of life for them and their children. Individuals look for better job prospects and higher salaries when moving to a developed
nation
.
For instance
, in a published survey, more than half of Indian and Chinese students surveyed told that they find the USA more attractive to live and would love to settle there.
Thus
, developed countries are a major attraction to many people from other lesser developed nations. The high level of migration brings with itself many challenges for both the immigrant as well as the
host
nation
. One of the negative consequence could be the high competition for jobs for citizens of the
host
nation
 as they have to compete with the new immigrants. The
second
 is the increased usage and demand for the resources available for people in the
host
nation
.
For example
, according to the news, the realty prices of houses in Toronto have been increasing 15% every year since the immigrants started pouring in at a high rate.
On the other hand
, there are many positive outcomes as well. Immigrants are
also
 a good surplus as skilled as well as unskilled manpower. Especially in cold countries where the inhabitants are very few.
Also
, immigrants bring with them some amount of foreign exchange which adds to the national wealth of the
country
. In conclusion, though immigration is on the rise in recent years especially for people looking for a better life, it brings with itself a few of positive and negative consequences for both the
host
country
 as well as the migrating person. A better evaluation of these outcomes before migrating is necessary for a better future for all.
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