The key to reducing crime is to have more police patrolling the street. How far do you support this proposal? What other ways of reducing crime may be effective?

In recent days, the question of whether the main solution to reducing
crime
is to have more
police
patrolling the streets or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention.
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idea may be
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appealing, but some analysis will show that it is not the key method and that other options are preferable. There are a number of reasons why having high numbers of visible
police
officers is not the key.
First
, by the state-of-the-art technology
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recent years, it must be said that many crimes are not carried out on streets. In fact, the number of criminal cases which are
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the Internet,
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theft or financial hacking, become gradually increase,
thus
would be invisible to
police
patrols anyway.
Second
,
this
tactic would decline minor
crime
such
as littering, but determined criminals
such
as thieves and muggers will find some ways to operate.
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those bad
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are planned carefully or happened immediately, which would hardly control by patrolling
police
. There are several possible alternatives which could be considered. It
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probably more effective to improve the efficiency of existing
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rather than increase their numbers.
For example
, by better training in computer-based
crime
,
police
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the rates of detection for internet crimes.
Furthermore
, another viable option would be to increase penalties for criminals.
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those people who intend to commit
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rime or not would be concerned by these penalties, which leads to reduce
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rime rate. In conclusion, cheaper alternative options will be far more compelling to address the root of the problem rather than
police
patrols streets. By applying effectively options, it would be helpful to reduce
crime
.
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