Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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modern era, there is arising awareness

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the topic of

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belief that technological advancement has made man become more popular. As far as I am concerned, I partly agree with the idea aforementioned. In

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following paragraph, my point of view will be analyzed in more depth.

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of all, it is intuitively obvious that sophisticated modern

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using play an indispensable role in enhancing and improving people’s social lives like robots using or smart house appearance. Everything becomes easy and quick when people just need to have a smartphone and can remote anything in their house in spite of staying a location far from their house.

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development

as well as social networking sites

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, as well as social networking sites such as Facebook, Instagram and YouTube,

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as Facebook, Instagram and YouTube help people in the world connect freely and easily with no geographical barriers. From that, people who access

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nternet can learn more new cultural knowledge and update news quickly from countries around the world.

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abuse especially social network reduces crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically and make a damaging effect on mental health because people spend all their time sitting in front of the computer or smartphone using to live on the

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and completely isolated from society.

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, a sedentary lifestyle is

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gradually formed when people are too dependent on

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, Since the introduction of household appliances like washing machines, dishwashers, cleaning robots which make people become lazier. By way of conclusion, I believe that all issue

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many disadvantages which affect badly for man

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cannot deny the advantages it brings. So, the government should publish policies to not only control the bad issues which are gone viral

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develop its useful features