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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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Discussion regarding
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 aspects as increasing students choosing overseas education Has conducted for a long time. While one part of
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 trend is positive for students because of learning different cultural aspects the other has many advantages for the tax base of the
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 where
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 students
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. On the one hand, getting an education in other countries is not only a prestigious trend but
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 allows students to become more closely acquainted with the cultural heritage of the
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 in which they are studying.
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, according to statistics from the Social University of London, more than half of the students came from other countries and in the course of the survey, many noted that studying the history of the
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 in which they are studying is very important for them.
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, every student who came to
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 does not have the opportunity to
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 for free. The cost of training for foreigners is always higher and
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 has a positive effect on the budget of the region in which
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 educational institution is located. The evidence base for
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 point of view can serve as a scientific
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 of the Ministry of Finance of England. In the course of scientific work, data were obtained demonstrating that the level of the regional budget is formed by 21
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 due to the increased taxation rate for students who came to
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 from other countries.
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 result proves the validity of the views. In conclusion, it should be noted that studying outside your
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 not only provides an opportunity to
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 the cultural aspects of the
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 and its history but
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 positively affects the budgetary policy of the regions.
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