Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather that secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, there is a discussion about when a person should

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learning a new

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. There are some experts who believe that

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type of education is more effective in primary school than in secondary school. I

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agree with them.

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possible advantages of

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, and how it can outweigh disadvantageous aspects.

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and foremost, I reckon that it is better to learn a different idiom sooner as possible

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because when you are a child, your mind is more open to new information than when you are older. I can use my own experience as an example, I started to learn English when I was 6 years old, I was the

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of my class to start to learn a different

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, and a neuroscientist once told me that

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was the reason which allowed me to learn faster than the others from my classroom. There are people who can say that if a student didn´t appreciate a new

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when she was a child, she can feel blocked in learning it when she gets older. I believe that

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can happen but it comprises a minority of cases. Learning new languages is very important to a person in an individual and professional aspects, and

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awareness

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with time. Whoever starts the studies of

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early in life, will have time to develop

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type of awareness, and probably because of that, she will be motivated to continue studying it. In the global culture which we are living, being able to speak more than one

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is a valuable skill. Earlier a person is exposed to new languages, better for her

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because she will have more time to learn it, practice it, and

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, be able to speak it fluently.

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather that secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishments. To what extent do you agree

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Some people believe that handwriting is no longer useful in the modern world and should not be taught in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?