Government investment in the arts,such as music and theater,is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead.

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suppose to spend their investment in the arts or public services. Some people believe that invest in the arts

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a waste of

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who do not think that.From my own point

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on the arts, but most should be on

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public services. It's important that the

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spends a significant amount of budget on public services

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as hospitals,schools,and infrastructure which is these things essential for our quality of life and determined the development of countries. Health and education,those the basic two vital sectors for everyone all over the worlds.I observed that when the

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decreased the public spending on those two sections,the result was increased health problems and diseases among the population,while the education quality

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was affected .

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eglected .

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,because the arts considered crucial for some people from all ages,as a good way to spend their leisure time ,

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a necessary resource of

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for some countries ,because the music and

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attracted many people from the country as well as from abroad to attend the

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to that,arts keep our culture and history alive for

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future generations. To conclude,even if the majority of spending should be directed toward public services,spending on the arts is not a waste of

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and should be continued.A balance is required to ensure public services are maintained whilst

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available for everybody. . .