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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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In the present world, parents often purchase numerous toys to entertain their children.
This
 essay discusses the benefits and the drawbacks of
such
 an attitude and why I believe it is mostly prejudicial. There are two main advantages to buying several articles for playing.
For instance
, research shows that the diversity of items available for play increases the stimulation of neural activity in different areas of the child’s brain as they explore different roles and stories potentially enhancing their cognitive abilities.
In addition
, said abundance has the power to create peace in homes as neither do siblings fight for a certain bear,
for example
 nor do they annoy parents whenever they have nothing to do.
As a result
, rewarding children with material gifts have become increasingly popular among parents throughout modern civilizations. There are,
however
, serious disadvantages to
this
 approach.
For example
, parents often regret
this
 decision as their children grow to become aggressive and immediatist, constantly demanding for more toys and gifts whenever there is exposure to advertising or sight of new products in the mall.
Additionally
, these traits eventually become a part of their life-long personality leading to complicated adulthood as they struggle with simple challenges, take things for granted and expect existence to be relatively easy.
Therefore
, with the evolution of the current generation those who were
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poiled struggle at studies, work, and have it harder in life. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have merits.
However
, I believe the potential negative personality impact that comes from excessive rewards overweigh its benefits. Each parent, in my opinion, should evaluate their children behaviour and development along with the ponderation of when it would be appropriate to surprise them with something new.
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