governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is often argued that the authorities should invest more funds on railways construction

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of building roads. I strongly

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support

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notion because trains are more affordable and can

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reduce

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jams in major cities.

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, enough access and

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if train service would significantly make transportation cheaper when

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compared

to buses.

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would go a long way to minimize the cost of transportation in big cities which have raised huge concerns over the past few years.

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, I usually spend 1000 daily if I use the road;

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, I would only pay half the amount if I travel by rail. Clearly, more railways

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that the public does not waste more

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half of their monthly salary on transport fairs alone.

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, the government should strive to make

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means of transportation easily accessible to the public.

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,

traffic

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congestion will be drastically reduced if most folks travel by train. Due to the fact that

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it

accomodates

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accommodates

more passengers when compared to the number a car will convey.

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, the level of

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jams in Rivers state has been obviously declined

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to the recent law introduced by the state

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which mandates individuals to make use of the railway

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of the road. Evidently,

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has reduced the heavy build-up of

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exeprienced

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experienced

by the River state residents.

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, authorities must focus more attention on the construction of more

raillines

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rail lines

as it makes life more

conviennt

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convenient

for the public. In conclusion, it is commonly presumed that the authorities should channel more money into ensuring

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vailability of

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rail lines

other than roads. I completely agree with

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idea because it makes transport cheaper as well as, mitigates massive

traffic

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congestions encountered in most cities recently.

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, they would certainly kill two birds with a stone as they can

effectivelysolve

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effectively solve

two major problems faced by the citizens with one solution.