The average age for individuals to give birth is increasing. Some people think that it will have negative impact on family and country. What is your opinion about this?

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ore negative aspect in families and country rather than
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ositive one. In my opinion, there is no adverse effect to our world because nowadays people are free of charge and make their own decision about everything.
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, in our modern society, people tend to stick to their goals rather than giving birth undecidedly. By that I mean ,people take into account getting
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ducation and gain experience in some sphere of their occupation in order to be financially independent,
then
they give consideration to have a
child
or not. Undoubtedly, it's fully their choice and depends on their mental health.
For instance
, most of the women are liable to be fully-funded by attaining their goals and their persistence because they understand that it will be much beneficial to ensure their future and
then
provide a decent life for their children.
Secondly
, it's commonly normal to have a
child
in the average age. When families are going to have the
first
child
in their life, they are becoming more responsible for
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ctions they make.
Also
, some new skills and
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characteristics
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in their personalities
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as
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careless
, love,
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partnering
support and even worries.
Moreover
, the birth rate doesn't do any damage to society or country because nuclear families are more likely to have no more than 2 children. By
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statistic, we can say that overpopulation will not have generated in many years later. To conclude,
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ate of
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's delivery is growing but there is no doubt that it is not going to be worse because of
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immediate
level of fertility. I still stand by my point that having children in the middle ages has no damaging consequences in families and countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average age
  • give birth
  • increasing
  • negative impact
  • advantages
  • challenges
  • effects
  • family
  • country
  • older parents
  • financial stability
  • maturity
  • life experience
  • health risks
  • parenting skills
  • intergenerational relationships
  • future generations
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