The average age for individuals to give birth is increasing. Some people think that it will have negative impact on family and country. What is your opinion about this?

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of our life , some people consider that in the

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age making

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's delivery has

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ore negative aspect in families and country rather than

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ositive one. In my opinion, there is no adverse effect to our world because nowadays people are free of charge and make their own decision about everything.

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, in our modern society, people tend to stick to their goals rather than giving birth undecidedly. By that I mean ,people take into account getting

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ducation and gain experience in some sphere of their occupation in order to be financially independent,

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they give consideration to have a

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or not. Undoubtedly, it's fully their choice and depends on their mental health.

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, most of the women are liable to be fully-funded by attaining their goals and their persistence because they understand that it will be much beneficial to ensure their future and

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provide a decent life for their children.

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, it's commonly normal to have a

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in the average age. When families are going to have the

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in their life, they are becoming more responsible for

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ctions they make.

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, some new skills and

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characteristics

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in their personalities

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, love,

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partnering

support and even worries.

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, the birth rate doesn't do any damage to society or country because nuclear families are more likely to have no more than 2 children. By

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statistic, we can say that overpopulation will not have generated in many years later. To conclude,

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ate of

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's delivery is growing but there is no doubt that it is not going to be worse because of

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immediate

level of fertility. I still stand by my point that having children in the middle ages has no damaging consequences in families and countries.