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Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product. Discuss if you agree or disagree.

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With the rapid growth of the
business
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 and trade across the globe, there has been high-level competition in the
market
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 since the
last
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 few decades. Because of the boom in industrialization and trade, I believe that there is a need for having a distinctive
product
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 or service for the population, to be ahead in
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 race. With the transformation of the
world
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 into a global village, there is an opportunity for
business
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 to operate all over the
world
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 without constructing a brick-and-mortar office’s or shops. Due to
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there is an abundance of the goods and products in the
market
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 and people have a lot of choices now.
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, the manufactures are in large numbers now to supply the products anywhere in the
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,
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 making it difficult for anyone to succeed in the
business
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. So, to stand at the top in the
market
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, the
product
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 must be unique and far superior to those of competitors to entice the population.
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, the mobile companies who enjoy
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dominance in the markets have distinctive features like memory size, battery back-up duration, processor speed.
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 to the above-mentioned point, the taste and choices of the people are changing with the time and, to be in a row of successful
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 units, there is a need of being dynamics in today’s fast-paced
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.
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, people are always hunting for something new and full of distinctive features so that they can be a symbol of class in society.
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, the fashion trend changes quite fast and the industry is flooded with the manufacturers but there are few top brands that dominate the
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 fashion industry just because they keep the
market
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 busy with the new stylish clothes and accessories. In conclusion, to reach the milestones in the
business
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world
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 today, it is compulsory to have a distinctive
product
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 or out of box ideas to provide outstanding services to the clients. I strongly believe that the innovation and advancement that emphasizes the version of any
product
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 can guarantee success in the
market
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 nowadays.
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