You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Marth, I hope you and your family are doing well. It's been so long, we met each other, remembering all the vacations we spent together in our childhood. Anyway, I'm writing to let you know that I'm planning to visit Vancouver, in January, regarding an exhibit my college is organizing.

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is a 15 days event, I would be the primary organizer managing the whole event. I was looking for accommodation

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those 15 days but could not find anything nice in the area around. I was wondering if it is fine to stay at your place, I would completely understand if there is any possible discomfort due to my stay, please let me know honestly, I'll plan for an alternative.

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, I don't want to be a burden on you for so many days and would love to pay you for my expenditure. I know you wouldn't like

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conversations;

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, I do understand your current

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. Let me know the possibilities. Can't wait to see your response. Best wishes, Mittu

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
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You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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