Some people think that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel for cars and other vehicles. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern life, the world is facing with

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global environmental issues. There are many solutions

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re given to cope with those problems, one of them is the price of

fuel

should be raised. Some people think that solution is an

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way to solve environmental issues;

however

, from my perspective, I strongly disagree for

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ollowing reasons. Obviously, the higher tax on petrol is likely to create minimal impacts upon minimizing the negative effects of pollution. The constant demands for travelling and industrial activities prove the ineffectiveness in that given policy.

For example

, Vietnam’s petrol prices increased sharply;

however

, there is no sign of reduction

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the traffic on the roads.

Moreover

, the high petrol price could easily trigger off a wave of social disagreement and protests. It means whilst people continue using traffics to travel and industries

also

need

fuel

to manufacture constantly; increase in

fuel

would

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affects the family economic well-being and factories’ revenue. The nature of global environmental issues is what kinds of

fuel

are used

instead

of the cost of

fuel

;

therefore

, the effective solution is to change usages and policy in using

fuel

.

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in CO2 emissions to

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nvironment is to lower the demands on fossil

fuel

. Based on

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O2 cycle, the biofuel namely

bio diesel

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biodiesel

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, bio petro, produced from agricultural and crops scrap, play a crucial role in decrease the dependencies of fossil

fuel

.

Furthermore

,

instead

of using fossil

fuel

in thermal electrical factories, the renewable should be taken adequate considerations to decrease the negative impacts

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fossil

fuel

. Taking energy harvesting projects as an example, Solar harvesting systems have been invested since 2010 in Binh Thuan, Vietnam; these systems

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a considerable amount of energy to national the electrical power grid. The global environmental problems should require serious considerations not only from government but

also

from any citizens. These evidentiary supports, I mentioned above, show the less

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in heightening the price of

fuel

to cope with those issues. Individuals and governments should figure out other extremely practical solutions

instead

of rising in the

fuel

tax.