You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information on the dates, the program, the accommodation and the cost.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

letter in reference to your upcoming conference in Toronto on the Impacts of Artificial Intelligence on

Business

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the Business

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Sector. My name is Madhu Jadhav and I am working as a consultant for a

Multinational

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IT company in India. I am interested to attend

this

session and

therefore

, I need your support to gather detailed information about the following.

First

and foremost, I need to know the exact start and end dates, so that

accordingly

, I can apply for leave at my workplace.

Secondly

, I will greatly appreciate it if you provide me

the

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venue details.

Secondly

, please notify me

the

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agenda and topics with respective speakers of the program.

Also

, I would like to know, if any topic related to Robotics will be delivered in

this

seminar. And

finally

, I would want the information about the type of accommodation provided and whether it is free or paid. In case if it is a hotel accommodation is it necessary to book it in advance? Your response would help me to plan for it in advance. So, I am looking to hearing from you soon regarding my concern. Yours faithfully, Madhu Jadhav

Submitted by madhuranijadhav on Fri Nov 20 2020

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

196 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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