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Nowadays it is not only large companies that can make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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The advancement of filmmaker equipment has made low
budget
 movies become more popular. I believe it is a great trend in the film industry because
this
 brings new ways of making movies. Low
budget
 films are usually focused on story-telling than visual effects to attract viewers. Many do not care much about profits but rather deliver truth or a reality
therefore
, the storylines are often unique and reflect
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ife of small groups in society.
For example
, there is a Vietnamese documentary film about the poor, which received many awards because of a unique story. The film was shooted for more than five years and the main character act as himself from five years old to teenage ages.
Thus
, the viewers may understand the development of the character and feel for his life.
Furthermore
, as it is easier to make movies, many young or unprofessional directors can be able to produce films, which creates diversification and innovation. Having to work with a small amount of money means that they need to think of different ways to achieve the result but still spending less money.
Hence
, there will be more room for creativity and innovation. In many cases, there is not a
budget
 for making VFX, that means actors need to do dangerous actions, which make the shoot a lot more real. To conclude, films are not just about stunning visuals but
also
 about stories and acts.
Therefore
, the development of low
budget
 films is a good transition to those which are more focused on the content rather than the look.
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