Being a celebrity such as film star or singer brings problem as well as benefit. Do you think that being a celebrity bring more benefit or more problem?

Almost everything has two sides – positive and negative; being a celebrity is not different. Sometimes it is good and sometimes is not, what makes a difference is a way they deal with it. I am not a celebrity;
, I can see the pros and cons of being one. I believe that famous people suffer a
because they do not have "peace" in their
. Most of the celebrities do not have a social
for example
, if they go out with friends and family, they are followed by people who want to take pictures of them to sell to magazines and internet blogs.
On the other hand
, famous people have a
of money to spend on what way they want. They always have the best clothes, shoes, bags and
the most expensive stuff. They spend a
of money travelling to other countries and having fun. Additional to that, a
of people want to be like them. I heard that there are some people who even do plastic surgery to seem like their favourite actress or actor. In my opinion, I believe that being a famous person brings more cons than pros. I think everyone deserves a good social
, in another word, going out and having fun without being followed or appearing on the front page of a gossip magazine or a blog. Overall, celebrities like an actress, actor, singer and sports personality, like to be famous,
, they would not choose
kind of job and occupations. More than that, I believe that they are used with
kind of
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