Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer game for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree
The noun phrase computer game seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the adverb completely should be an adjective. Consider replacing it.
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
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