Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children ? What are the consequences when they grow up ?
It has been a norm that contemporary parents tend to meet all the demand of their children. I insist that
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negative tendency would have some detrimental impacts on Linking Words
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youngsters when they enter adulthood.
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, over-caring could trigger children to become heavily reliant on their father or mother for approximately everything, even basic tasks they can do by themself Linking Words
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means that they would lose the chance for early independent skills practice ranging from self-thinking to self-acting, which are vitally important for their later stages of Linking Words
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, in light of unconditional and boundless providing from parents, the offspring tend to not only be unsatisfied with an already possessed asset but Linking Words
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be ungrateful to give and take value. Taking their parents’ treat for granted, it can be witnessed that a majority of modern youngsters are having various types of irrational behaviours like greed or snob. Linking Words
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, overindulged children still pester to buy the latest version of toys which are prohibitively expensive, albeit having a sheer volume of similar ones.
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issue may have important repercussions in his or her adult Linking Words
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a great deal of
bad spending habits would be accumulated on a daily basis since the value of hard work and the importance of successful financial management skills has been underestimated. Change the quantifier
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Consequently
, they would indulge in an extravagant lifestyle rather than a financially healthy and balanced Linking Words
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, which usually is a main culprit of bankruptcy. Missing out on valuable opportunities to be early independent, those minors would have to deal with many difficulties happening in later Use synonyms
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, when encountering issues at work, in lieu of striving to find the feasible solution, these individuals who got familiarised with Linking Words
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before would easily surrender and hopelessly rely on the assistance of their peers.
In conclusion, as overindulgence has a number of adverse effects on children’s early and later Add a hyphen
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, parents should consider it to satisfy only the child’s reasonable needs.Use synonyms
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Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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