Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

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been essential in order to connect cities and reduce travelling time in the
last
decades.
However
, its
construction
can carry several financial, health, and environment issues for humankind. Authorities must
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work in how to solve the indirect
consenquences
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consequences
and create a preventing plan to ensure a clean city , reduce accidents rates and care the nation's funds. The concept of Globalisation has been forcing many cities to build modern motorways with the aim of connectivity. The
construction
of
this
kind of route allows people to travel more
comfordable
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comfortable
comfortably
and faster than
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common ways. Highways can connect two
further
points between cities or
also
countries and concedes to the users to save time which can use for emergency.
Although
all the practical
benifits
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benefits
that the common citizen can see, there three
importants
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important
area where highways can affect in the long-term.
First
of all, the environment, its is the most affected with the
construction
of these paths because many lands are damaged and
exploted
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exploited
exploded
exposed
.
this
situation sparks several issues in the biodiversity of species due to that animals and plans loss their habitat.
Secondly
, with the
construction
of rapid ways
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more drivers tend to use them without caution and responsibility. In fact, the rates of accidents increase dramatically after the
construction
of motorways, namely, in Melbourne and Sydney.
Finally
, another point
that is
important to mention is the cost of these structures, the investments are enormous and many authorities think
that is
better
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pend
these great amount
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of funds in other
deparments
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departments
.
Accoding
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According
to the consequences declared, it is crucial that authorities made decisions and
controlate
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control
the situation.
First
, in terms of
environment
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issues, the government must
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regulate the number of lands and
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atural zone which be affected.
Besides
, it is
also
essential that the government be supported by
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envionment
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environment
specialist in order to create options to relocate the fauna and flora affected. Regarding
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the growth of accidents, the
educatio
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education
department must
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encourage young adults and all members of society to know the signal
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prevent
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accident. In conclusion, I strongly believe that motorways
represents
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connectivity which is essential for any nation and
also
for the growth of each country.
However
, the authorities have to take all the considerations before
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to build.
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